Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-4436931-20190311030429/@comment-37881884-20190320140804

Ahmeddilmi.2003 wrote: I revised the two chapters on my fanfiction and edited them.


 * I corrected serveal mistakes (grammar errors/spelling...etc)


 * I totally scrapped the Malaysia match and made it a +5 goal differnce win for Japan.


 * I added a scene after the match and before Haizaki's scene at the end.

Please re-read (If you already did.) The two chapters if you may. I read it, but the review will be in the late evening ;)