User blog:Miimka12/the inazuma eleven story

hi mina I've written a story about inazuma eleven. Here's the beginning of it:

One day Tachimukai Yuuki was walking on the street. The sun was shining in his face. It was a perfect day. Suddenly he saw a brochure on the floor, in which was written : The team who wins vs China in a soccer match could be send to learn in a soccer specialised school. Tachimukai understood that his team could be the winner because they were very good at soccer.

He went to Endou Mamoru with the idea to tell him that.

mina pls tell me if the beginning is good or not. If it's interesting for you, pls tell me to continue the story.