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Ana.mat.ada wrote: I liked it, maybe you should start writing plots on wiki? :) When the commentator was talking, I imeddiately imagined that guy who comments on matches in IE, I don't remeber his name now. As for me, the description of the match was too long, I got a little lost. On the other hand, we don't know what happened in the second half, we only know that they won. But I'm more interested in the interactions between people than the match itself. And I'm really curious now what Haizaki saw.

Thank you for your kind words :) I am planning on stating a whole wiki for the fanfic as it procced. The commentator's name is Kakuma Oushou.

As for the description of the match, I really don't know, I just imagined how the match went and started writing.

I decided to skip the second half mainly because it wasn't that important and I ran out of ideas.

You'll see what shocked Haizaki in the next chapter :)