User blog comment:Genda Koujirou/InaIre Wiki first fiction contest - winners!/@comment-3554193-20130518181924/@comment-3554193-20130518182927

For the 3rd story, I liked it because it has a good plot. I like how Kirino being a jerk (esp when Shindou was on phone, so relatable x'D). The ending is good since i was suprised that Midori and Kirino set this up. It's a bit confusing @ the end about the "because they're idiots" part (or maybe i skimmed through that last part?). Also, the story has used quite a lot of idioms at the beginning but seems to lost it towards the end. The French restaurant scene was good too.